OMG, this is incredible! Yay! 'Yay' seems so feeble, because really, this is awesome stuff. Very riveting and I love how you did the transition, what with the talk about his apartment. Fascinating that Javi's opinion means so much to him. He's referenced repeatedly in there when he talks about his safe/happy place.

I loved the Fight Club reference. Great movie.

Also, I was practically bouncing up and down at the beginning about how Peter could take Konrad's power and be semi-powered-up again!

Oh, and pet peeve of mine: "reins", not "reigns".

I really love this!