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black_sluggard ([personal profile] black_sluggard) wrote 2012-08-17 03:03 am (UTC)

These changes might work, I think:
"My place at Arthur's side is necessary to guide that for our future," Angela insisted, "but we've agred it's best if Danny handles the revelation—about the Company, about specials. Arthur's...not ready to know about my part in it. Not yet."

"Doesn't that ever bother you?" Konrad asked.

She knew Konrad hated it, that her marriage had been based on false pretenses and not real love. It almost seemed to hurt him more than it hurt her, which was...really kind of sweet of him, in a way. But while Konrad had disagreed with Angela's methods, he was resigned to her commitment, at least. After Nathan was born, it had been impossible for any of them to doubt it.

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