Oooh! That's so pretty and yummy and awesome and tingly! Cool! I was so, *so* wanting to see Gabriel play a little more of a role (without overpowering the story) and this was perfect! Having Noah in there made me feel they were competing divine agents - one an angel, the other a demon, both whispering suggestions, but it's hard to tell which is which. They framed it nicely and I love how their input was the catalyst for Javier's decision.
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I love it!